She was already late. She had
left the city an hour later than she had planned and now she was stuck in the
traffic jam from hell. Her phone was
dead so she couldn’t even call. She knew
he would be worried. She tried to calm
herself down before a case of road rage really kicked in. She turned on the radio and listened to some
smooth jazz. Within minutes she was lost
in the music and her jangled nerves calmed.
She could do this.
What seemed like hours but was
actually minutes later the traffic jam eased and she was on her way. There were
several cars and emergency vehicles on the side of the road. But for the Grace of God it could have been
her. She was always hurrying. Sean was
always telling her to slow down. He was
her exact opposite. He didn’t rush for
anything or anybody and yet everything he touched turned golden.
They had been together for over
fifteen years but had never bothered getting married. Their thinking had been if it’s not broke
don’t fix it. They knew other couples
who lived together for years and decided to marry only to be divorced later.
However the news she received today would definitely change their
relationship. That was why she was in
the city. She had been feeling poorly
lately and after a couple of trips to her local physician had been referred to
a specialist. Several tests had been run
and today was the appointment to hear the results. She was pregnant. She had been told she would
never be able to conceive so it was a complete shock to her and it would be a
complete shock to Sean also. She couldn’t wait to get home to tell him.
By the time she walked in the
door he was frantic with worry. When he
couldn’t reach her by cell phone, he called all her friends, her parents and
anyone else he could think of to see if they had heard from her. She breezed in the door as if walking on a
cloud. She saw him and it was as if the
cloud burst. He was all grim and
bearlike. He took her in his arms, gave
her a huge hug and kiss and upended her.
She was sputtering, telling him she had a good reason for being late and
he was being unreasonable. He wasn’t
even listening. He was taking his two
hours of worry and frustration out on her butt.
When he finally stopped he let her up and once again took her in his
arms.
“I was so worried” he explained
“I know and I’m sorry but the
traffic was horrible and my cell phone went dead”
“Are you telling me you still
haven’t replaced the car charger you lost last month” Sean asked
“No, I mean yes”, she said
sheepishly.
“You know I ought to spank you
again for that. We live so far out that
it is dangerous to be without a charged cell phone at all times. How many times have we talked about this?”
“I know, I know. I promise I will get one tomorrow”
“You better, because if you
don’t, you will be eating your dinner standing up. Do you hear what I am telling you?” He asked.
“Yes”, she answered.
He asked her what she wanted to
do about dinner. She told him she wanted
to go to Bella Vista.
“Bella Vista is pretty expensive
for an every day dinner. Why don’t you
pick someplace else?”
“No, she said, I want to go to
Bella Vista.” He didn’t argue.
So they drove to Bella
Vista. Because it was a Tuesday night
they had no trouble getting a table. It
was on the lake and very romantic which was why they usually saved it for
special occasions. Their small table was
set with a snowy white cloth and the silverware and glassware sparkled in the
candlelight. Carrie reached across the
table to hold Sean’s hand.
“Aren’t you curious why I wanted
to come here tonight?”
“A little” Sean answered, “but
you seemed pretty adamant”
“Let’s order and I will tell you”
When the waiter came, he ordered
their usual appetizers and a bottle of wine.
When it arrived, he started to pour some into her glass and she stopped
him.
“Don’t you want any wine
tonight?” as he began to fill his glass.
“Not tonight”, she said and picked up her water glass to
raise a toast.
“Will you marry me” she asked.
“Why the sudden interest? We have
talked about this and always said that unless children were involved we didn’t
see the need”
She just continued to look at him
all dewy eyed and she could see the light bulb going on in his brain.
“Are you telling me what I think
you’re telling me?
She nodded . He took a large gulp of his wine and asked
her to tell him everything.
She explained how she had not
been feeling well and had been sent to a specialist. She just had the results today and that was
why she had been late leaving the city.
He felt a little sheepish about
spanking her but then realized she more than deserved it. All the more reason she should have kept her
cell phone charged. And why hadn’t she told him she hadn’t been feeling
well? Now he was going to be more
vigilant than ever . All these thoughts are filtering through his brain as he
is rising to get to her across the table.
He is pulling her up out of her chair and lifting her up and twirling
around. The other diners are watching
and smiling - feeling the joy of this couple.
That night as they were lying in
bed entwined in each other’s arms she mentioned that he hadn’t answered
her. Not thinking, he asked what was the
question? She punched his arm and said
she wasn’t going to repeat it; he could just think about it and let her know
when he did. With that, she punched up her
pillow, pulled the sheet up around her neck, rolled over on her side and tried
sleeping.
“Oh no you don’t”, he said. “You
are not going to ruin the best night of my life without telling me why I am in
the doghouse.”
“You still don’t get it, do you”
she replied.
“No, I don’t, that’s why I am
asking you to please tell me”
“I asked you to marry me and you
didn’t respond” she whined.
“Tonight you told me news that I
just said made it the best night of my life, of course, I will marry you. I would have married you after our second
date if that was what you wanted. I love
you and I will love you forever, with or without children, you silly goose.”
She rolled around and cuddled
into him.
He called her the next day and
asked her to meet him at an address in the city. They were supposed to meet at 5:30. It was 6:05 and he hasn’t heard from
her. He didn’t despair just yet. She was always running behind but if she
didn’t call him soon it was her behind that was going to suffer. 6:15 and still no call or Carrie. Finally at 6:25 he sees her turning the
corner. He walks up to greet her, looks
at his watch and ducks into a nearby ally.
When she passes, he grabs her, pulls her into the alley and places her
over his hip. He lands a few well placed
smacks on her butt and begins lecturing her on calling when she is going to be
late. She sheepishly tells him that her
phone had no bars.
“Not again, he said. Did you not promise me to get a new
charger? And did I not promise you a
good spanking if you didn’t?
“Yes, she said, but I have an
excuse”.
“Well, I can’t wait to hear it
but it will have to be later. We have an
appointment right now with the jeweler.
He wanted her to pick out an engagement ring and wedding ring. She had no trouble finding one she
liked. The engagement ring was a simple
princess cut solitary diamond set in white gold and the wedding ring was a thin
white gold band with pave cut stones.
She constantly amazed him. He purposely did not put a price limit on the
ring sets. The set she had chosen was
well below the cost of what we would have chosen for her. They also chose a ring for him.
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Looking forward to part 2!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Susie. Hope you enjoy the ending.
DeleteIt is a fun process, but a process none the less some days on finding the right balance with a story. As you say...sometimes it just comes easier. Will be back for Part II:)
ReplyDeleteIt is a fun process. Hope you enjoy the ending.
DeleteNow I have to wait an entire day for the end!! Thanks for a happy send-off_ since I need to work today!
ReplyDeleteHere's to tomorrow.
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DeleteOooooh! I can't wait for part 2!!!
ReplyDeleteGlad you stopped by and hope you enjoy the ending.
DeleteLove it. Can't wait for part 2!
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DeleteGreat story so far!!! I'm glad I came back to read blogs on a day you put out a story, sunnygirl!
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DeleteWait! It can't end yet?! I can't wait till tomorrow!!!
ReplyDeleteGreat start to a story....
Hope the ending doesn't disappoint. Glad you are anticipating the second part
DeleteI'll be back tomorrow. I love excuses!
ReplyDeleteHugs,
PK
Being a teacher I am sure you hear lots of them.
DeleteGreat romantic story. I'm glad Son had a dentist appointment. Gave me the opportunity to come and read here.
ReplyDeleteNow, how do I get rid of him tomorrow, for part 2.
Hoping Son goes out and gets you some private time to read. Good to see you here.
DeleteGreat story. Moving quickly onto the next part :)
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